The Dreams

[NecroFlash]

no this one is not coherent, but it has a neat sort of flow, methinks...


dreams of the forgotten
of lives once lived
have you seen what they wanted?
if not by now
maybe tomorrow your day will come
maybe maybe maybe you
will see someday
when you can remember that which
has been dreamed by all
those who have never seen
even if their eyes were open at
the time it all happened
but you must remember the dreams
the dreams my boy
they are the key to all that which
follows from here unto then
oh the dreams
you musn't forget the dreams


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one more for the day, then i will be gone...


i remember the way you bled on me
your tears falling from your eyes
mixing with the blood dripping onto me
i held you, i talked to you
but you did not say a word
only tears - tears were your only words
i prayed you would speak to me
but your mouth was sealed
you were silent
i couldn't hear you
not even sobs
just tears and blood
mixing with my sweat
as i held you so tight
so tight
close to me hoping and
praying
but you couldn't say another word
so i had to let you cry




[This message has been edited by NecroFlash (edited August 09, 2000).]

[Fénix]

My foavorite is the second one...really, really good!!!

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The darkness in my soul is eternal. It shapes my destiny and I embrace it.

[Chilimuffin]

I love the first one - I think it's a really good representation of regret in a weird sort of way. The second one is good as well, but somehow the narrator's voice in the first one catches me more. But you know me, I love all your work .